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Friday, May 6, 2011
The Highlands-prolouge
Ari, woke suddenly due to screams echoing down the hall. He sat up and listened...were his ears mistaking him or did he hear the clash of swords.The elf jumped out of bed and grabbed his bow and quiver. He slung the quiver over his back as he raced out into the hall. A terrible sight met his eyes. A wizard, one of his best friends lay dead on the floor, blood soaked his robes. Beside him were two maids weeping over his body.
"What happened," asked Ari,his voice shaking slightly out of fear.
"A group of drow," one sobbed."They've gone mad. He tried to fight but it was ten on one."
Ari heard footsteps coming. He strung his bow and knocked an arrow, pointing it at the end of the hall where shadows masked whoever was standing there.
A drow stepped out of the shadows. His black hair and eyes made him look strangely like a wraith.
Ari released his arrow. The drow leapt out of the way. In a blur, he pulled a short sword from beneath his cloak and sped down the hallway, dodging arrows as he went. Ari dropped his bow and pulled two arrows out of his quiver which turned into short swords with a single word. As the drow came near he threw one of the swords in a helpless attempt to slow him down. The drow twisted in midair, avoiding the sword by an inch. He landed silently and twisted his sword around with lightening speed, bringing it toward Ari's head. Blocking it easily, Ari forced the drow's sword back towards him and in the same motion kicked him in the chest sending him back down the hall where he landed with a sickening crunch. The drow lay motionless. When he didn't get back up, Ari collected his bow and the other sword which had turned back into an arrow. He put the arrows back in his quiver and followed the sound of the fighting. Near the end of the hall he found two more dead drow. He collected their arrows and stepped over them to go down the stairs. He descended slowly, picking up a length of rope off the ground as he went. He knocked an arrow and tied one end of the rope to its tip then tied the other end to his waist.
He went down many flights of steps. He turned on a landing and ran down the length of the corridor,terror creeping over him. When he got to the end where a large window stood, he threw a near by vase at it. The glass shattered leaving a decent sized hole. Ari began picking off the rest of the pieces, quickening his pace because of the footsteps he heard coming. The hole was now big enough for him to fit through without cutting himself. Aiming his bow at the building across from him he pulled back on the string and released. The arrow dug itself deep into the bricks. Ari gave the rope an experimental tug. When it held, he climbed up onto the sill and crouched down ready to jump. Just before he leapt, a drow appeared at his shoulder. The drow grabbed him around the waist and slammed him back onto the floor. Ari tried to get up but suddenly there were six drow all holding him down. Then a bag was shoved over his head and an intense smell wafted up his nostrils. He started to feel sleepy and relaxed. He stopped struggling for he could no longer see the need to. He just let himself drift off into unconsciousness.
(If there is any part in this story that you feel is cheesy, poorly written, needs more detail, or anything else please tell me because constructive criticism always helps. Thank you.)
Tuesday, April 12, 2011
The inheritance trilogy
I don't know if any of you have read Eragon and the two sequels but i have and i just got info on the new one that's coming out. im really excited
it will be out on november 8th 2011 :) READ IT!!!!
it will be out on november 8th 2011 :) READ IT!!!!
Thursday, March 31, 2011
writing part 2
just in case anyone is interested im going to start posting one chapter of the book im writing every once and awhile so you can read them. if you want to say anything like constructive criticism please feel free to comment. All comments help even if its with name choices or something small like that. :)
thank you.
thank you.
my lifelong competition
This person at school named hannah is constantly trying to beat me at everything because she thinks im really smart so she likes to be smarter. Truthfully im not really that smart i think i just pay attention to the problems more. Anyway, in the exit exam prep class she was really mad at me for getting every question right away. Everytime i got an answer before her she would get really mad and so this went back and forth until our teacher told us to stop haha.
Thursday, March 24, 2011
writing
i began writing back in like 5th or 6th grade. None of my stories were very good. The names were so bad that im not even going to mention it. Then in 7th grade i met my friend justine. she was writing to and i learned a lot from her. after that i kept writing and now i have lots of different ideas but not finished books. none of them were very interesting so i keep starting over. right now i only have one but im already getting tired of the idea so i might start a new one.
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